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Great chap! And what's this? Do I sense love blooming?
8D

Such a good chapter! Very interesting! You two are doing well. ^^

i can't wait to read more but just one curious question:
is the story going to be one thousand and one chapters long?
lol just wanted to ask because the title and you're naming the chapters wishes that would be cool if you did, but very, very, very, very (you get my point) long lol

I really like how you have the story too it's amazing and curious too hope you update again soon, well when you can. ^_^

Ha ha, Atinyane's format got messed up in the email. I'll submit mine so you can change it if you want.

Osprey

Good story so far, I give you the thumbs up!
I like Airen, he doesn't stand for any nonsense.
Atinyane just sounds like a desperate and stuck-up princess.
Blackmail!
Oh, in a book by Tamora Pierce: Lady Knight, there's a quote from that book that had me laughing.
"That's blackmail."-Kel
"Actually, that's extorsion, blackmail implies..."- One of Dom's men.
In reviews, i find it so confusing how i just start rambling on about a random subject.
But your story is great, and i want to hear more of your stories!
Love
KAYLA BROWN

Haha, great chapter, Gup-chan!
Airen and Atiyane sure are an interesting pair!

awesome yet so sad lol love the good writing!

update as soon as possible

your fan
~anaa-pixie

Too lazy to log in.

And wow! This stories really interesting! I'm gonna write one of my own soon!

A few spelling areas on Airen's part, but I like the description of the dancing alot! Well done.

aw so sad!
please write more its so interesting!

Hey, this story seems pretty interesting!
Gupse, I think you're writing as Airen[sp?]
/nods.

I think your writing is getting even better, it was really good!

Atinyane was captivating as well, but I wasn't so crazy about the way it was organized, with the lines and such breaking off. Sure, it makes it seme more poetic, but a little annoying when I was trying to pay attention to the literature and plot. Still though, fantastic job to the both of you!