 knits alot 2009-04-21 . chapter 2Oh no! I didn't know there was a sequel. You might want to add something to number 2 to that effect.
I have to admit Laura has a right to be worried. Most moms would if your 15 yo was dating an adult and we aren't talking a young adult like 18 or 19. Alienating your son isn't helping the situation at all though. In fact he needs her compassion more now than ever. She's all but driving him into the arms of an older man.
You could go dark side with this story and make everything we know about Jack untrue and make him some evil psychopath out to mess up Ethan. Please don't do that.
Thanks for continuing with this story. I'm grateful to have found it. Good luck with upcoming chapters. |