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Twilight424 2009-05-16 . chapter 1
Well, I liked this, but sometimes it got me all confuzzled. Like, she died in her dream, right? Or was it real life? And then does the guy bring her back to life? Well, maybe I'm just not deep enough to figure it out. But I did like it; it was dark, but kind of elegant at the same time. My favorite part was where they were talking about their fears. And by the way, I love your profile. It is so...randomly silly!
bran4ever 2009-03-31 . chapter 1
So why would he do that to her?

It's a wonderful piece and I really love your interpretation of such a wide theme challenge.

The way the sentences are finished in the next step really show how her death occurs and I love this style.

Beautiful and awful and captivating, the idealistic and stylistic aspects really are what make it such a good work.

May you find the leprechaun's gold!
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