Oh, come on! This one SOO needs to be continued. they need to get to know each other more!

And us, the readers, need to get to know the characters a little more, too.

~Mo~

PS-- In case you didn't know, I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS ONE-SHOT! THIS IS THE BEST ONE YET :)

Oh my god, this is really good!! i really think you should add another chapter, seriously, you're a really great author!!
-K

Aww, that was it?!

Very unique. Unlike anything I've read. Good work!

The introduction needs a bit of cleaning up though. It isn't very clear.