Excellent poem.

This was good. I mean I was getting tired of reading She appologised and he appologised but at the end it all went together and made me think. I really like it now. Thanks for putting it up!

i thought it was really good actually. very... perceptive, i mean it really makes you think a lot about a lot of different things. i cant really write exactly what it makes me think of (a little to personal, ya know). but i liked it