I liked this. A lot. The writing style may not be your best, but it was really heartfelt and sincere, and as a writer, I'm a firm believer that when you put your heart on a page, it will sing a song to reach out to other people, no matter how horrible the writing is. Not that yours is horrible. It wasn't, I assure you. I don't agree with you in some parts, but I could see where you were coming from. Consider it that your duty as a writer has been fulfilled. I liked it. Really.