|Reviews for Choke|
| Melissa Norvell 9/27/09 . chapter 1
Eerie and depressing. In a way it's beautifully tragic. Great poem.
| Forget-Me-Not's Desire 3/31/09 . chapter 1
hey! I love it! I think how you worded it is really cool! Like the part about "liquid courage" (which I assume means alcohol)!
| ilikebooks 3/31/09 . chapter 1
VERY interesting. very, very interesting. i dont think i can say any more than that lol.
| The Candle Thief 3/31/09 . chapter 1
"...leave me in a suit of grey..." Love that line. :)
I like the image of him choking on the water (morbid, much?) but yah, it made me think of how turkeys look up at the sky when it's raining, and drown that way. It was certainly a morbid twist on curing hydrophobia. ;)