|Reviews for Say It|
| kynthiaphellan 3/31/09 . chapter 1
I like it...relatable for many. Listen, this poem is something of a poem about a crush. It's something every girl knows and has felt. You have decided to portay those feelings here. When you portray something that is known so well by so many, you have to be sure you describe it correctly. Otherwise, the poem is ineffective in making the reader know you know how they feel. And if it's not good, chances are people will laugh at you.
All in all, this was just average. You could really do better with this.