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la.douleur.exquise 2009-11-21 . chapter 4
just wanted to say that i love you, and this story, and because of those two facts i will wait as patiently as you need me to until you can update again. but please, please, please, please, please...well you get the idea, don't make the wait too long, eh? happy (soon to be) holidays. i wish you pumpkin pie.

lotsa love, liz.
Mo- The Reviewer 2009-11-14 . chapter 4
Bailey should just call "Bulls**t" and have them tell her, like Jared did to her!

... Though I doubt they would tell her ... :/

Okay- So, something happens on their birthdays that they are trying to hid from Bailey. I'm guessing it has something to do with the summary... but maybe that's just me *shrugs*
Anyway, Jared is obviously in love with Bailey and she is probably his "mate" or whatever (He HAS to make her feel happy, after all, and she was the only one that could stop him when he was in a fit of blind rage).

Am I right?
:D

PlEASE [U][P][D][A][T][E] ASAP!

~Mo~
Mo- The Reviewer 2009-11-14 . chapter 2
WOW

I cannot say i expected that...
AT ALL.

Don't worry, it's an exciting surprise :)

~Mo~
eskimoxisses 2009-11-13 . chapter 4
WEREWOLVES

maybe?

ahh, jared seems like a good character.

tis sad jordan is being abandoned;
i thought he was a scrawny kid being harassed by others.

continue if ya can,
thanks for posting chapters.

eez very goo :B
Reticence 2009-11-12 . chapter 4
i love this! awesome story here. take your sweet time updating - i'm not being sarcastic, despite how i sound - i'd rather you update late than not at all.

love the characters, plot, overall hotness, lol ;)
micheal is the man 2009-11-10 . chapter 4
omg,
i totally adore this story. it has a differentish plot and i love that they dont tell her everything from teh beginining..they are werewolves and she is jareds mate:)

UPDATE
Lyrical.Love 2009-11-07 . chapter 4
i love this!
please update soon:)
sheeparelikesocool 2009-11-05 . chapter 4
is dustin supposed to sound like dustBIN?
ThePureAndSimpleTruth 2009-11-02 . chapter 1
I read the first chapter as soon as it came out. Now, I find myself thinking about it all the time. I am waiting...semi-patiently. :D So so eager.
miss-life 2009-10-30 . chapter 4
Hey! I've had alerts from FP about this story for I don't know how long! Probably months! So today a little birdie tells me to read it (I was bored, while waiting for my mom to get off work) and I loved it! I absolutley loved it! And I'm so mad at myself that I didn't read it sooner!
Amazing! Briliant! :D

Tina
ceridwen 2009-10-29 . chapter 4
I can't wait for you to update. I'll wait forever if I have to. Your stories are awesome!!
Kazza Moonshadow 2009-10-26 . chapter 4
I really can't wait for an update on this. It's keeping me at the edge of me seat!
Lady of Confusion 2009-10-24 . chapter 4
awesome story! update asap!
runwayx23 2009-10-24 . chapter 1
I've just fallen in love with this story. Wow, and it's only been four chapters! Haha. I love Bailey and Jared's relationship. They're so cute together! And I'm glad it's not a love triangle; I love Jordan too much to see him feeling left out. I also like the friendship between Bailey, Jordan, and Jared. It's natural and not forced at all. And finally, I'm excited about this supernatural dimension to the story. I have no idea what Jordan and Jared are but the way in which you've written so far, it seems more real and not fabricated? I don't know if that made any sense but overall I just really love this story! Please update as soon as you can!
Nerdette 2009-10-18 . chapter 4
Sounds great!
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