Aw, poor girl.

I liked this a lot. The characters seemed realistically portrayed. Emotions seemed just right. You did a good job of balancing the dialogue and description and whatnot.

Will there be more?

- KE

Aww! That sucks for Bridget! I hope everything works out for her and Kyle in the end. Until then, I'll be reading and seeing how it plays out!

This story's real cute, I like where its going. Hope you update soon =)

I really liked this! There was a couple of points where I noticd you said 'your' instead of 'you're' and the same with 'to' and 'too' but other than that it was really good... and Im drooling, and I cant believe I just typed that... LOL
Anyhow, write the next chapter! *said enthusiasticly, but kind of drunkly too* YAY!
P.s. Im not drunk, Im just unbearably tired.

Hi its me again.
I love your chapter two, sad. . . but good!!

I hope you update soon!!
I mostly add peoples storys cause I want to read them later when I have nothing to really do. but I'm hoping you'll update soon you've captured my attention! I love your story!!

:)

Love crazygirl101

P.s. I bet you'll have plenty of reviews if you've already got 3 just on chapter two!! :)

I like how it is a two shot! I think it is a good change and it will help you become a better writer. I love the way you word it. very detailed! I think you should have made the part about Bridget confessing her love for him more detailed. I absolutly love the comparison you made to stained glass. I kind of had hoped that she would have chickened out about telling him because she did not want to risk their friendship but I like the direction you are taking it. You also left a big gap between when she told him and when he left the house.

Reminder: Guys don't think about what girls think about them that much. Just remember not to make Jared to caught up in his emotions.

~Rachel Libster~

:( poor bridget. if that ever happened to me.

Jared *slaps him*.

you write really good:)

Wow I really like this story.
I say if you like people who are wondering what will happen next then you probley want to write a longer story,and if you don't like those sort (Which I think everyone likes those sorta reviews) reviwes you probley want to write a short story.
But I say you should do a long one unless you don't have a lot of time on your hands.

Love crazygirl101