I loved this! I'm a reader, not a writer. I don't have any constructive criticisms to offer, just my adoration!

So, I have a secret fascination with boy/boy stories that's not so secret anymore, but what turns me off the most is when they are unrealistic. This one was perfect. I mean, I'm bi, I sort of know what it's like to carry a secret like that and it's hard to keep it, yet it's hard to tell someone. I absolutely hate the slash stories where all the characters are gay and nobody cares, because guess what? People do care.

So anyway, I really like how you played out Julian's character. He's so much more realistic than most of what I read. And I know that I've read your other stories, but I don't remember them. Except Gay As His Wristband, which is how I found you. I loved the picture, by the way. Too bad you don't have the link anymore. :(

Ok, I'll stop rambling now. Just thought I'd let you know that I appreciate your realism. :)

Ahaha, I love the whole brotherly-love-y-ness in this oneshot!
Again, I ah-dore your stories.
You're an amazing writer! (:
*goes to read another random story*
Did I mention this is the only thing that is saving me from drowing in boredom?
You should be happy. You're officialy a hero as of now. ;P
Buh-bye! xD

This was adorable. It had a really wholesome, apple-pie type of vibe. (That sounds weird, but it's accurate, I guess.) The brotherly friendship was extremely well done and your dialogue was fantastic- very natural and had a good flow. Even Jack's nervous chattering felt realistic...

I think you're absolutely amazing, and so is Ryan.
He's probably the coolest kid I've ever read of.
You're fantastic. :)

heh. that was cute. :D

So...I think the only thing that I can really say is that I loved it. And that I can relate to it. (Okay, that's two things. xD)

Anyways, when I told my sister I was gay, I was really nervous. But when I told her, she gave me this look and said, 'Duh. Mom and I thought that for a while.' It's nice to know that I can connect to Julian.

This is beautiful! It's being favorited, like almost every single one of your stories. :)

- Kelsey

this is good, but there is one issue i have: "my identically hazel ones".. you wouldn't actually see you hazel eyes so it was a bit strange...