That's so sad... GO cere go, uh i mean Cereline...

WOW... I feel exactly like I'm *there.* Please continue soon!

Excellent!!! I wish I could write something with that much depth and character, such profundity (I don't even know if that is the right word I'm looking for...). There is nothing that I can see to make that any better... the only problem was not with the story but with the formatting. There were a few and around the italic words... bit distracting from reading it but as I said, there was nothing wrong with story itself. It was just wonderful!