I love this one- another one of my favorites. I think it's an extremely interesting concept, which certainly helps, and a very original one. And I like a lot of the symbolism- 'the red hot sins pouring out' and whatnot. And the last two stanzas are just plain incredible.
I think it was delightfully sexy, without being anywhere near too blunt, and I think it had a very nice rhythm, and some great lines.