Wow. Found this while browsing the net.

Those are some powerful phrases! especially the short bit in the middle of the prologue where you descibed Amadeus's gasps/exhiliration; but the term 'scarlet-whore' is a little too much? maybe its' just my opinion, oh well. It's really good! Continue pweez! x

ps: will you review my story?

x. alyona . iva

This certainly gives me inspiration towards me own writing. In fact, I felt it was too short but it still gave me quite the satisfaction of a thriller series.

I honestly enjoyed it. I think you did a very good job of portraying the thoughts and feelings that accompany a serial killing. There was enough detail for me to form a mental picture, but no so much that it interrupted the flow. Could do with a bit more detail for the characters but still, very good.

Pay it forwardRoadhouse

I already reviewed this on DA, but I'll review it again because . . . well, to give you a review. :D

Coming from someone who thoroughly enjoyed drawing Amadeus, I'm really excited to see this all come together. I knew he had indiscriminate sex with a bunch of women, but I wasn't sure if he was actually a murderer. And apparently he is. But that doesn't matter. Still loves him. :D

And Amanda sounds awesome too. The summary of the story sounds right up my alley: drugs, sex, violence, language, all that good R-rating stuff. ;)