Aww loved this once shot it was fantastic! I only wish it was a longer story! Like the before and after of his girlfriend and anna and dans relationship! Still it was great and im adding it to my favourites! Lol

This was really cute. (: I loved it.
Thanks for writing this.

Thank God you accept anonymous reviews. I can't seem to be able to log in.
Anywho. I loved this. Seriously. It was full of emotion. It had a few mistakes here and ther. You said "Please" instad of "Place". :D
Did Dan really say that to you?
Love,
Ali

I like the concept, but there are a few typos in here (most were extra words that stuffed up sentences, eg. 'Dan was just sat there looking patient'.) other than that it's pretty well written and an enjoyable read.