|Reviews for Disappear|
| NorthernShadowedSky 11/13/10 . chapter 1
I really like the line "If I had looked at you before you crossed the door". That was phrased really well.
| simpleplan13 4/25/09 . chapter 1
Review Marathon (link in my profile)
This piece was kind of confusing. I think you leave too much up to the reader to figure out when you use ... instead of telling the reader what you're talking about. I like the first five stanzas, but then when you switch to "you don't know" I just got really lost and confused.
I did really like "I never realized you were a victim/
of your own thoughts and monsters,"... that was a really great description. I liked the way you phrased this.
| Lilja Ruusu 4/6/09 . chapter 1
"I never realized you were a victim
of your own thoughts and monsters,"
I think alot of people feel like this sometimes, it made me think of suicide, like being trapped in your own head and you can't get out...
| Erlkoenigin 4/5/09 . chapter 1
. I’m afraid everybody sometimes wants to disappear
| Franziska 4/5/09 . chapter 1
I’m afraid everybody sometimes wants to disappear