truly hilarious

My sis had suggested I read this and it really is funny. I wish I had a pet snail that could talk to me; that would probably complete my life

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Lol i like the sign part. i havent finshed reading this story yet, but I will later. Would you humor me and check mine out (x

Ahahahaha! Love this bit- “Go on then, just hurry up to the bit where she shatters your heart into a million pieces.”

glad you see you're still writing babe! i still love it!

Oho, a bit of backstory I see. It's interesting seeing Ratbreath as a kid. And I really love Angel; the descriptions you give of her are lovely.

This is to funny. I'll read on.

Ho ho ho, even funnier! it's great how ratbreath beats up those students. Is there going to be anymore student beating later on?

Haha! This is great. Love the college students- but i'm confused. So they're not actually college students? are we talking about college as university or is this something different in your contry? *is confused*

lol

Ohoho! Is it bad that I feel a little bit sorry for the college students? I guess they didn't steal Ratbreath's Bin after all... I wonder who it was?

This was a funny chapter (though, if I must say, maybe a little bit cruel) but it did amuse me. Ratbreath's personality seems to swing from pleasant and nice to a vengeful maniac. XD

Oh, and Ratbreath's a terrorist! I expect he's going to have to be on the run from the law now, and Suzy's going to have to go with him. I'm getting some main character vibes from her.

I'll be looking forward to the next chapter! Could you email me at when you put up the next one?

Suzy's a funny character. I like the whole 'goffik' thing- it reflects well how kids try and act like something they're not, like how many teenagers dress up as 'emo's'. I suspect Suzy's friends are also 'goffik'. :P

A good introduction. :) You've set the story up very well- I'll read on to the next chapter.

it gets better and better! you better write the next chapter soon!

hehe! i love the tramp- hobos are great. :D