| Reviews for Silent Fingers |
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wo bu ai ni le 6/28/09 . chapter 1Admittedly I don't know if I've got the right idea, but it seems like death and finding the undying memories. I'm terribly sorry if I got it wrong, but I liked the coldness of this poem. fleur |
Thornprick 4/6/09 . chapter 1awesome! it's so mysterious and i love the ending! |
strobeXlightXstatic 4/5/09 . chapter 1ACK! I don't know where to begin! I've been offline for a while && look what I get when I come back! 29 alerts from you crazy people saying that new stories/poems are up. This review is for all of your latest and greatest creations: WOOHOO! I especially love Violet Eyes. Keep it up, lael. Some of us live off of your creativity. |
Storyteller's Shadow 4/3/09 . chapter 1Oh! *claps* well done! Love the emphasis on the YOU at the very end. The only thing to change is put a capital in the begging of every line. |
Isca 4/3/09 . chapter 1"Silent fingers pressing down, the evidence dies." The imagery here is so spooky and mysterious-it reminds me of a person walking through an old attic or something and finding something scary. Cool! |
Lilja Ruusu 4/3/09 . chapter 1"Silent fingers pressing down, the evidence dies." and "I cannot believe, That I found YOU." were my favorite parts! Great poem! |