Nice. Life continues on, as does death. :)
You write about excellent though provoking topics!

Wow, this sounds so lonely, and for anybody who has lost some one important to them, they can relate to this poem. Cuz, when a loved one dies or goes away it feels like that for whomever they've left. Very deep, I love it.

[And yet, life moves one.
The world has moved one]

Those both confused me. Did you mean "on?"

But otherwise, this was a really great piece! Your really managed to convey a lot with so few words.

Your manipulation of mood is very effective. It seems like the narrater is pretty indifferent to the seperation, until the last line, which leaves a strong impact on the reader.

Your wording was also great. You used very common phrases, but they were used in a creative way that conveyed your meaning well.

Really great piece :D

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