I have absolutely no idea where this story intends to go, but I do love it.

Why, hello mon ami!^^ See? I told you you should update it!^__^ That was awesome, my friend. I am THOROUGHLY jealous. You explained the politics well, and I'm definitely getting a sense of how the systems works. I REALLY like Regzrgr. It was funny--while I was reading some of his lines, I kept picturing an old British gentleman saying them, with sort of an evil grin...who knows why?xD Other lines, of course, sounded JUST like you. Like the line about Regzrgr telling the guy to wear different colors.xD And I REALLY liked your description of life...it made a lot of sense, and 'twas profound. Well done!

...phew. I'm long winded today.

Only one thing--the end seemed a little rushed. When he met the people hunting unicorns? After that, it all got very fast paced. I think you could slow it down a bit--have more of that description that you had in the beginning. But all around, great job! Can't wait for more!^_^

Nice! I really like how these two chapters blended together.xD You have a funny story, but my only thing is that the end seems kind of hurried. Next time slow down a bit, even describe the scene. You have room, and don't worry, we'll stick with you.^^ Anyways, awesome, can't wait to see what happens next!

-Sara

A very funny story! Keep it up. :-)

Lol! I loved your summary!
I thought this chapter was really short, hopefully they'll be longer in the future :)
I liked the dialogue, it really gave me an idea of the different attitudes of the mother and the witch.
Again, I really enjoyed it, and can't wait for more.

I love it. Biting hydrangeas? I want one.

I really loved your dialogue. It was quick and natural, something that is so hard to do without it sounding forced. (I actually laughed when I read the part about matches. xD)

I also like the idea of an ugly child being born into a world of fabulous wealth and beauty. I can't wait to see where this is going.

And what's this about a dragon that likes dirty jokes?

Update soon! :)

Awesome!^_^ Can't wait to read the rest.xD I love the hydrangeas thing.xDD