Old story but I found it ;) And it's good, I like where it was headed. If you happened to write more of it somewhere else I'd love to know so I could read it. If not, it was a great piece and you should definitely continue with your writings, whether this or others. You're talented :)
Pepper

Sorry for not reviewing earlier - I couldn't get hooked to the internet for a few days. Anyways, I really enjoyed this entertaining and interesting piece you presented here. It had a lot of insight to your charaters. NICE!

Very nicely written, I am curious about Annabelle and what kind of adventure she is about to have...:)

Cheers

awesome story! please update soon!

I presume you're trying to say "“ Tell me (a) story.”

This is really niceI wonder how it turns out!

Narq.

I like it alot...curious as to where it is going...

:)

Update soon

:)