Wow...looks like we got some drama.
Need Another Chapter.

Hi. I found the intro appealing ( i once attempted a similar thing i.e. to 'not grow-up' ^_^) -- so i decided to take some time to review this.

Firstly, i like how you began this, but i think this sentence > "The illusion of flawless serenity has been shattered by this one house, but had only disrupted the life of one small child." needs to be reworded.

After that, it's all good. I like how this ended.

This story is good. I like it and it's pretty funny. Interesting subject as well.

I can relate so well to this. 'not growing up' sounds good if you think about it, but high school will eat you alive if you're like that. Love ur story. Keep on writing!