I don't ever remember the Marquis or General Washington begin gay...Or maybe history has written over this fact and we read today that Washington was married. Very interesting piece indeed...

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I had read this the day you published it! But, I had to go, and I couldn't review. I forgot to review later.

Anyway! On to the actual review.
I think this is just a pet peeve of mine, but I don't like it when people use bold letters, capital letters, and underlined letters to stress emphasis, instead of italics. Bolded letters and capitals are meant to catch attention; not just emphasis. Underline letters, I really don't use them, but normally they're just for underlining books or whatever it is they do. Yeah, I think it's a peeve of mine.

All in all, though, it was wonderful. I actually remember ranting about Hamilton and this chapter to people who could care less. They just nodded. Though, no matter how mad I was at Hamilton, I was awed at the way you wrote his parts and thoughts.

I leave you with, unfortunately, a grammar mistake in the fourth paragraph. At the end. A period, not a comma.

Again, I apologise for not reviewing sooner.

-Pleasure.

I really love it. General W. and Lafayette are the greatest. You write really well. Please kep it coming!
P.S. I love the French added in. I can just picture Lafayette speaking.

pov shift in the beginning wasn't clear, so things were a bit jarring, but a nice concise chapter overall. I'd suggest changing "je t'aimerai" to "je t'aimerias" since the imperfect conjugation signifies a state of being that is and will continue to exist while the future tense is just as the future.

very captivating introduction. i like the formal/olde style of writing and the balance between action and description. very promising start

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That had to be my favourite out of the two you have posted so far.

I love how you introduce it with a poem, and then follow through with a "poem" of your own, if you will. You have such an illustrious way of writing, it just graces my heart. Really; that sounds cheesy and oh-so sentimental, but it's totally true.

That was always one of my favourite scenes of those two; now you have made it better... ♥♥

Lafayette's supposed to be induced into George's "family" that night. D:

I liked it though. :3 Can't wait to read more.

What Lafayette said was supposed to be on the same line. You only go to the next line if the previous sentence ended in a colon or if a new person is speaking/being talked about. :3

Were they standing? Or were they sitting? That bit confused me a little. And, alas, it was the double negative (?). He wasn't meant to be standing, and he was sitting, but then he stood? Odd.

'Tis cute. :D Still can't wait.

-Avec Plaisir