confusing and yet sad. LOL. dunno why but I couldn't understand it at first but I guess I got the idea in the end. haha!

Omg.. This is one of the best poems I've read on fictionpress. The clever juggling of words leads out a whole train of thoughts and brings out the despair of being in love and hurt at the same time.

I feel exactly like this at the moment =(

~fleur

I know that feeling! Great haiku :)

the title says it all...I love the shifting...