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MidnightFlight 2009-04-08 . chapter 1
Jaime Jaime Jaime...you finally posted something! XD Great chapter, but there is no way in hell that you are making this a one-shot. My curiosity is sparked and you won't like me when it's not satisfied!

So write. Update. Now. And the second chapter better have more answers than questions! And no, I'm not going to be all nicey-nice like little Katie-Kins below. SO ** UPDATE OR I'LL ** FIND YOUR HOUSE AND BEAT THE ** OUT OF YOU! Even though I'm sure lots of that is asterisked out, I'm sure you get the gist of it =]
Maplewing 2009-04-07 . chapter 1
First one to review! Oh, what now Monika?
So, I can see you have a lot of confidence about this story, hmm? "One more if you're lucky"? C'mon, you can do better than that! This chapter is awesome, I want you to continue it! You left a whole lot unanwesred, whether out of laziness or on purpose (how rude). I want to know why this girl (I assume it's a girl, all your main characters are ;D) is running, who Alex is, who the other girl is, and what the hell is gonna happen next. Hear me, Jaime? Continue. Update. Now. Look, I'm being nice. Do you read any threats? No? See this forced smile? I'm being all polite and everything!
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