Hey it's me again! xD Agh! Write more! you haven't had an update in 2 months and this story is really good! AND you stopped at the suspenseful part! But i did like how this chapter was a bit longer. :) Long chappies make me happy. I also like how you introduced parker! Looks like conner's got some competition ;) Oh and by the way, whatever happened to that story you were writing once... it was from 2 peoples point of view and it was romance. There was ths girl wih white hair i think? And did you think of writing from Conner's POV? It could be intresting. He could either think she was annoying and not realize he liked her or he could like her but always hage his words come out wrong or other things. You don't have to follow my suggestion if you don't want to though. Oh and would you consider writing a story together? I'm trying to get together a few people. What we're planning is to come out with a story line and then each person pick a POV of a character to write from and the story is built like that. It's pretty cool cus I've seen it done before.

they like each othr. def.
but Parker sounds cute![:

cliff hanger!
i luff it[:

awh! fav. chappie so far!

I love this chapter passionately. Mostly because Connor is one of the hottest names I've ever heard (makes my ears happy) and that Constance is just an overall amazing person so far. I love her/your choice of words, they make this rather amusing to read :)
On to the next chapter.
P.S. Steve should go die in a hole. Stupid bastard.

Awesome chapter :) Your writing style has Really improved, in my eyes :P Really great work :) Keep it up and update SOON!

Hey, I really liked it! Aw, so cute that he stood up for her! I actually had a feeling that it was Connor that called her name, and I was surprised when it wasnt, but I suppose that it really did work! Uh, you did the whole being hit in the face with a ball thing really well. I so know that feeling. It happened to me once when I had leant out my crutches, so when I got hit I nearly fell over. It was pretty ironic really. Anyhow, really good chap, your writing style has improved I think :P
Update soon

Aw, thats mean! Although, she kinda did deserve it for stomping on his foot. I have issues with guys calling me a **, so if I was her that would really get to me. Its kinda funny though if you ask me :P
Sorry it took so long for me to read :P

This was definitely not ordinary. This was GREAT as well as the other chapters. I love it. *hands author cookies baked with love* :)

Oh yay! Another chappie! So:

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGIOMGLOVEDOMGITOMGOMGOMGOMG!

Love it, heaps. I like the "I saw Steve walking around with a crooked nose". Ha! Serves him right.

Cholera (hehe) doesn't seem like such a bad guy if he's punching pricks who pick on girls (no matter how assertive she may be...). This is a very funny story and I like how you write!

naw Izzy.
It's adorable.
Ok I really dont know how to say the sentance when Connor was all like
“You. Got. Her. Hurt. On. Purpose.”
I really cant.
Good chapter.

And they say chivalry is dead!
:)
Go Mr.Giant. And I don't care what Constance, or you say, I'm not gonna stop calling him that.
And I laughed very hard at 'Cholera'. I mean, seriously. Who would name their kid after an STI? Hahahahaha.
Great chapter
:)
Holly

Ooh, pretty good so far. I like it! ^^

Wowza.
What a jerk.
I'd call him a prick too!
Yeah, the chapter is kinda short, but it was a good little pick-me-up!
Update as soon as you can, and don't rush it, because trust me, I know what that feels like.
Holly.