haha i laughed my way through this. Everything was perfect..besides the end a little rushed...but i still loved it!

the parents are o amazing!
charlotte

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ah-mazing!so what is the other one percent?

This story is so unique and cute , I love it !
It's amazing ; great job .
Hope to read more work of yours soon :)

Sincerely,
Saraelle .

OMG...I love Ellen, and that quote, and procrastinating...I'm actually doing it right now--putting off writing a paper. But anyway, this was a really interesting one-shot, I loved the "hippy" mother and the way you kinda made me think Steven was in love with Harmony but he ended up feeling that way for Melody. Very nice surprise.

This was really cute, and I liked the whole sinister element, though this was tied up a little too neatly (even though Gregory is an idiot). However, this was creative and again, super cute, and I'm very glad xoxluurve added this to our c2. (:

aw this was really cute =)

Aw...I love this story! It's so cute! I love how you portrayed the characters and how it actually has a plot for a short story. A lot of short stories that I've read don't, only a few do. But anyways, great writing style! Keep writing!

that was awesome not choppy or anything. for some reason i like gregory, dont know why. and people who procastinate rule the world :D in some werid way like cause yeah...anyways that was awesome :D i hope you write more ;]

I liked it and I'm srry if I have encouraged ur fiance lol. =D

I like it...the confrontation about how he loves her sould be a bit ore dramatic. Just curious, what IS the other one percent?

LOL very cute!

xx

I liked it, but not as much as your other stories.

I lovs this one-shot!! That's all I've got to say.
Grtz Silencia