This was excellent. I've recently discovered that I have a strange affection for love triangles with twins. Which is a little weird, but anyway...

Your writing was great. It was easy to read, and your characters quite great.

Very nice job. ]

not much love development. but still good :)

This is a really good story! What's the other 1%?

I'm curious. What's the 1%?

Sweet :D

Adorable.

I liked it. At first, I really thought Steven is in love with Harmony, but huzzah, he's not. Yay.

'Great story..love it.! :)) until next time.! :D

"What's the other 1%?"

... what does that mean! I know you've been hearing a lot from me today. _ I feel like some creepy stalker, I apologize. Cute story though! Great way to use a cliche and yet still steer away from it. :) Although I thought Steven was gay at first. XD

SO awesome! love the twins and their friend xD great story and writing, can't wait to read more of it!

I liked it! :)



Bubbly Girl

heyy I love this story! It's so cool!

I love their names, especially Melody.

And LOL at Soprano! Hahaha!

Great job, i love one-shots, so carry on writing them!

Hahaha. Great job. You mentioned that you thought it was choppy, but to me it flowed along fine.. just Steven's confession came really unexpectedly.. but were you trying to do that? Anyway, I rather enjoyed it. :). It ended way too quickly though.. it was like all the non-romantic drama led up to that suddenly romantic, unexpected confession.. then it all fell into place sort of BECAUSE they confessed. Just felt a little weird. But all in all, good work!

I love Ellen! Great story...

pretty good, but i wish there had been more confrontation between Gregory and Sfeven