I love how fluid you are with the symbolisms of such simple everyday things to the depth of the inner core of who you are. This is really excellent and actually took me a while to make the connections through, you're dialogue is very articulate and I am truly amazed. Great work! This is probably my favorite one of yours.

this is another to look at the sky! great poem, loved it! the tone here is calm and soothing, it makes me imagine the tinted sky

Fav line:

"I need to become the sky"

very interesting poem. i love the sky and i loved the way you described it being tinted and blue and white. "i need to become the sky", to become infinity? to outlive everything? the sky is gorgeous :) thansk for the reviews, by the way!

I enjoyed this a lot. I love your direct mode of expression. your body of ork is something to be reckoned with.
and typo or otherwise the line "I sad discovery" is wonderful.

Marvelous sound progression. I like how it is broad reaching and universally true. The short lines enhance the observations and realizations. Very well written. MD:77.

"I sad discovery" is a bit confusing, but yeah... I'm sympathetic I suppose. ^^ Keep it up!

"I've lost something. Something has been trapped; kidnapped." God, you don't know how much those lines spoke to me right now; I feel the exact same way. Thank you for putting these thoughts into words! :)