LOL, I liked Dan's last though :p

Heh, Sandy totally wants Mark's peen. That's OBVIOUSLY WHY HE WANTED TO COME INTO THE HOUSE LOL DUH MARK WHY ARE YOU SO DUMB OMFGG

lmao.. sorry. x) Another great chapter, as usual.

and another fail review from me :D but at least you know I'm still reading haha

Ohh, Saturday. What's happening on Saturday? :p
Sandy is such a little snot, but I love him

I have nothing to say... other then the sexual tension between Sandy and Mark is unreal.

Sorry.

I'm done.

Finally, the first sign of any kind of romance is hinted. Or.. maybe not.
But Mark is apparently straight.
Because of Mary. Sort of. Well, anyway. I can't wait for the next chapter :D
The only reason I like Mark is because I can relate to him :/ Sandy's a little bitch.
"Because his face annoys me." :p

Dan's smart. :D I like him. Hmm... "his face annoys me" YOU MEAN IT TURNS YOU ON, MARK. DUH.

Great story!
You really know how to build up the story, or should I say the tension?
And Dan's final taught... well... I couldn't have put it better myself! :)

All I want to say: I like his brother.

The end.

Wait, another thing: I love this story.

Okay, the end.

WAIT! I like Angry Bear Mark.

OKay, now for real, the end. forrealz.

Very good, engaging story! I like how you're developing the characters and rivalry... I'm really curious about Sandy's motivations...
Their anger is so palpable I don't see it diminishing too much any time soon, but we'll see! :)
Thanks, & anxious to read more!

great chapter. The two of the just don't know how to be nice to each other. They just kiss and make up ^_^

;_; no I want more fast now hurry you can't end the chapter there that wasn't enough gogogo


;_; my reviews suck lawl.

mark is such an idiot, you have to love him lol.

Once again, a wonderful chapter! Favorite scene: Sandy and Mark's staring episode in the cafeteria. Our boys seem to be getting somewhere (albeit slowly)!

One part did confuse me though: "Sandy was staring at him with his head against the window and a blank expression on his face and, just for a moment, John’s dislike of that face matched Mark’s." Hmm... why?

Teehee. Funny how Mark liked a girl who had hair just like Sandy's. ;D

they totally want each other.

Finally getting around to reading this, and I like it so far. :P