 Anon 2009-11-21 . chapter 9 Aw, Mark's obliviousness about his feelings toward Sandy is endearing. You create/maintain the tension between them really well! Reading the demonstrations of their hate/? chemistry is addictive...
As always, looking forward to reading more!! |
 learntosayhello 2009-11-20 . chapter 9xD Oh, Mark. I love how he's like, "Rogers, number one mood killer."
We all know that it was Sandy he wished he was macking on :p |
 EllYouSeeWhy 2009-11-20 . chapter 9omg I really wanna know what happens next! Sandy pisses me off I hope he does something and Marks family see, they've got to know it takes two! I'm a 'spot' too :D |
 CaseyBear 2009-11-20 . chapter 9Mark almost had it going on until Sandy ruined it. The little bitch.
Sorry. I love Sandy... but I think Mark and him should just do it like rabbits. |
 Lerene 2009-11-06 . chapter 7LOL, I liked Dan's last though :p |
 rrrrrrachizzleness 2009-11-02 . chapter 8 Heh, Sandy totally wants Mark's peen. That's OBVIOUSLY WHY HE WANTED TO COME INTO THE HOUSE LOL DUH MARK WHY ARE YOU SO DUMB OMFGG
lmao.. sorry. x) Another great chapter, as usual.
and another fail review from me :D but at least you know I'm still reading haha |
 learntosayhello 2009-10-27 . chapter 8Ohh, Saturday. What's happening on Saturday? :p
Sandy is such a little snot, but I love him |
 CaseyBear 2009-10-27 . chapter 8I have nothing to say... other then the sexual tension between Sandy and Mark is unreal.
Sorry.
I'm done. |
 learntosayhello 2009-10-18 . chapter 7Finally, the first sign of any kind of romance is hinted. Or.. maybe not.
But Mark is apparently straight.
Because of Mary. Sort of. Well, anyway. I can't wait for the next chapter :D
The only reason I like Mark is because I can relate to him :/ Sandy's a little bitch.
"Because his face annoys me." :p |
 rachizzleness 2009-09-28 . chapter 7 Dan's smart. :D I like him. Hmm... "his face annoys me" YOU MEAN IT TURNS YOU ON, MARK. DUH.
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 koerle 2009-09-24 . chapter 7Great story!
You really know how to build up the story, or should I say the tension?
And Dan's final taught... well... I couldn't have put it better myself! :) |
 CaseyBear 2009-09-24 . chapter 7All I want to say: I like his brother.
The end.
Wait, another thing: I love this story.
Okay, the end.
WAIT! I like Angry Bear Mark.
OKay, now for real, the end. forrealz. |
 Anon 2009-08-31 . chapter 6 Very good, engaging story! I like how you're developing the characters and rivalry... I'm really curious about Sandy's motivations...
Their anger is so palpable I don't see it diminishing too much any time soon, but we'll see! :)
Thanks, & anxious to read more! |
 Lerene is to lazy to log in 2009-08-31 . chapter 6 great chapter. The two of the just don't know how to be nice to each other. They just kiss and make up ^_^ |
 rrrrrachizzle 2009-08-30 . chapter 6 ;_; no I want more fast now hurry you can't end the chapter there that wasn't enough gogogo
;_; my reviews suck lawl.
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