first off I liked the title :P it struck me as a kind of bitter humor. Anyways, I really love this poem, and how origional the topic is.

It all tied together at the last line: "the quirky kind of beautiful never meant to be kept neat and clean,
wrapped safely in poetic verse." *speechless* WOW! That was amazing! you just summed up what poets have been doing for hundreds of years in two lines...pretty powerful stuff. I think i can rightfully say that you've hit the nail on the head. Fantastic job!

~Habs :)

very nice, Dani. I hate you right about now. Haven't been able to write a decent poem in forever and here you are spewing them out. And it's not like your spewing bad ones no they just happen to be amazing (unlike their authoress :P)...gr...

:D