   sheeparelikesocool 2009-11-08 . chapter 5update please! its lovely! |
 Girlwithideas 2009-05-25 . chapter 5OMIGOD! so good!! |
 A. M. DeFabio 2009-05-24 . chapter 1I can't wait to see what happens. |
 Amber 2009-05-09 . chapter 5 This is a really good story. I have one on here too. It's called Moonshine. I would appreciate it if you could read it and give me some pointers. I love this stroy. I hope Jaiden and Laila get together soon. |
 lala lexxa 2009-04-24 . chapter 5aw i love it so far! |
 pinkeclipse 2009-04-23 . chapter 5LOL! LOVED it! Thank YOU! |
| Rynx 2009-04-23 . chapter 5 super cute storyy! XDD! Uwa! I can't wait 4 de next chappie! XDD! |
 Crazy colorz 2009-04-23 . chapter 5awsome story cant wait for the next chap XD |
 M.J. Dawn 2009-04-21 . chapter 4haha great work my friend. write more, SOON! xoxo |
 xoxtina46xox 2009-04-21 . chapter 4Great chapter! i really love this story so far (: |
 Uniquely Proud 2009-04-21 . chapter 4Ah hello!
Great rewrite!
Feel like a whole new story. xD
Update soon! |
| pinkeclipse 2009-04-20 . chapter 4 I LOVED IT!! |
 Nuttyginger 2009-04-20 . chapter 4Love the rewrite!! Still love Laila's character!
Nutty |
 EnChAnTeD-KoReAn 2009-04-13 . chapter 3That was cute. Nicely done. |
 CATpuccino. 2009-04-11 . chapter 3Love it, tho is just me or Laila is bitchier and more annoying than the former Little Girl? |
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