This is wonderful such a beautiful poem.

"i scream a violent violet melody,

but your blue ears cannot hear.

cheer up love, the skies are a yellow tint,

from all of of this excitement."

I can see all the colors. Loved it!

adding to my favorites

now this is really lovely. there are so many phrases i like - 'let in the color,' 'violent violet melody,' 'soft pink of a shy blush. / the way your eyes change in the light.'

one tiny thing - you're missing the r in monochromatic. but other than that, this is nicely done.

"I don't know if I could adjust to a light like yours." BEAUTIFUL! MOVING! HEART-WARMING! :D

i love this

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you are my extreme. LOVE IT great job, thus im adding you to my faves list. keep up the good work!