wow. ... wow. this is AMAZING .. really!! i love it. i don't even know how you came up with it all, but MY MY, its all so true!!. "What we are/is badly-written poetry in motion." and "We were born knowing how to lie./We die without knowing the truth." and "Gravity is what we invented
to explain to ourselves why we can't fly." and "I miss/who I wish you were." and "It seemed like a good idea/at the time." were my favorite lines!!

Hmm.
This is a lot of food for thought you know. Most people would explode from the fullness of eating all of this in one go.
Sasa

I'm slightly confused by this, honestly, but I like it. My favorites:

h.
Gravity is what we invented
to explain to ourselves why we can't fly.

m.
I write because I'm broken in a broken world,
and my fragmented words might save us.

r.
It's a letter in a word in a sentence that doesn't exist
and wouldn't've made sense anyway.

w.
The leaves die, fall from the trees and crumple,
crumble beneath our booted feet.
Destruction was never so beautiful.

It was very interesting to read, and you have some really great quotes!

~Shenhua Phantom