 Princess-anna57 2009-07-03 . chapter 1Wonderful piece. :) Keep writing!
~Anna~ ^_^ |
 VictorInChrist 2009-06-26 . chapter 1OS often we take for granted the little blessings that God has given, and often the bigs one as well. Nice job, remembering and being thankful for all He's given is wonderful! God bless |
 ChristianAngel01 2009-06-06 . chapter 1It is true that God blessing us with His love :) |
 Anglachele 2009-04-27 . chapter 1Well said. Nice reminder of God's integral role in the world and our lives. |
 simpleplan13 2009-04-26 . chapter 1The punctuation was off here. Each stanza is not one sentence, some are more than once sentence. You're also missing some commas.
"birds sing happy songs"... happy seemed like such a cliched word
"Water flow’s across our land"... flows
Really nice piece. The rhyming works well and the picture it creates of the world is really nice.
PS Check out the Review Marathon and/or the Review Game (link in my profile) |
 lael1bologna 2009-04-19 . chapter 1Very good poem. |
 AuthorNinjaEarth 2009-04-13 . chapter 1A great and awesome truth. Thanks Needa for sharing it with us all. BTW, how've you been? Excellent work as always! |
 May Elizabeth 2009-04-09 . chapter 1This was a nice read. It had a peaceful feel to it which I loved. Also it had a nice rhyme to it. Great work. Peace. |
 moonlover46 2009-04-08 . chapter 1Wow that was beautiful and true. God Bless. |
 The Postscript 2009-04-08 . chapter 1I like this .. Easter, especially, is always a wonderful time of year that reminds me of all the blessings we have through the Lord. Wonderful work. Keep writing and God Bless! k. |
 hayella 2009-04-08 . chapter 1It's very promising like it conveys the continuous blessings even for the future. It engulfed the feeling of thankfulness to God-the very one who created everything.
It is nice:)
God bless & thanks for letting me read this! |