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| Reviews for Sacrificial Brevity |
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   no.peace.los.angeles 4/9/09 . chapter 1Whoa, the end line is super creepy, but sexy at the same time. The phrasing of this is really lyrical and I like that. It's dark and raw and sensuous. Very nice. Keep writing! :) |
| kloun mannequin 4/8/09 . chapter 1 I love the verse 2 |
| kunoichi-socks 4/8/09 . chapter 1 The imagery you used was great! Well done! Kat :) |
