|Reviews for tArGeT|
| multiples of six 7/18/09 . chapter 1
Nice, I like this! I could hear the rhythm of it in my head even without reading it out loud. It sounds kind of like a song. And the repetition is great.
| May Elizabeth 4/19/09 . chapter 1
This was intresting.
| Lilja Ruusu 4/15/09 . chapter 1
"You're the kind of boy
who looks innocent,
ready to break my heart."
Great lines, I really liked how you described it...