This is a really great poem...like God's stream of consciousness, almost. It reminds me of one of my own poems and I can really see God's hand in it. Great job! :)

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A very innovative religious poem, taking God's point of view. I love it =)

~fleur

Captures the essence of a God that would have a consciousness similar to that of a human--very Roman. I like it, as it is pleasant and structured. Nothing revolutionary, but I don't think that's what you're going for. Kawaii, well done.