Not boring at all. :) Really interesting, in fact. xD gw paling suka bagian 'tiny little thing' diambil. Wew. Cool lol.

wo-ow.
what a great read! I loved the flow of it, or maybe it was a beat, boom boom boom getting better and better. And there is just enough in his thoughts to make it interesting and fast paced like that, it was never boring. And I've never read anything like it before. Great job, great read.

if u make sure it's all one tense then it's fine