Aw, this broke my heart. Poor Dylan, I'm he's to blame and all. But poor guy.
I commend Kayla for her strength :) good job.
Aw, their daughter sounds cute.

GOD.
I'm crying. Again.
Even if he was selfish and cowardly and stupid, I still think Dylan should be happy.
It makes me sad to see him so... lifeless :(

Damn it lmao, I wanna read 'Almost' but I'm scared that it won't end well like this :\ You write so well, and reading this was heart-breaking.

Again, you wrote that so well! I'm glad he realized that he made a mistake!

omg
it makes me cry.
i love your stories!! i was so happy when i heard bout this one! i thought that maybe they would get together...but no...its not a happy ending. i wish though..
anyways. i loved it. dylan is an idiot for letting her go. so stupid...
i hope you write another story!! i'd love to read it!!

I just finished reading 'Meet Me Halfway' and moved on to this..it's very well-written :) But it just made me feel really sorry for dylan. it's kinda sad esp considering what a lively and promising young man he once was. i was almost about to say that his lot was largely determined by the burdensome responsibility he inherited by his wealth so we can't totally blame him, but then that's not true- he could very well have chosen kayla and continued wearing the badge of the elite he so prizes. He learnt his lesson didn't he (well maybe that's the only good thing that happened for him in the end- becoming more mature), although he still needs to become less self-centred (oh but aren't we all fundamentally).

It's funny; I just re-read the prequel to this and after I was like it'd be cool if she did a one-shot on what happened to Dylan and when I looked at your profile--there was one! :D

Although I was hoping Jed would make an appearance, but I was definetely glad when Keys made an appearance and that she got to say her final words to Dylan.

Good job :)

Really good. But really sad too. Can't wait for you to start another story!!

That's soo sad!! Maybe you could continue it and make Dylan a doting parent? Y'know, overly-affectionate, making sure his daughter gets the fairy tale he didn't get! (I just don't want this story to end...XD)
Grtz Silencia

I love the way u write, the way ur words flow and the raw feeling behind them. Dylan brought it all upon himself, but I can't help feeling sad for him..

I'll be sure to check out any story u'll write in the future!