This sure takes me back, reading this- I remember the original pretty vividly, and it was one of those stories that stuck with me long after I stopped visiting FictionPress regularly. I'm glad to see you're back in the saddle so to speak, because your unique blend of characters and scene detail are something I've sorely missed.

-Ragnarok

oh. i really like this version better than the other one. it tells everything right off the bat. like her brother and stuff so it won't feel like things are coming at us out of no where while were reading.

haha i am liking their new attitudes. but then the transition between jynxx and kacea glaring at each other from afar to suddenly taking an interest in each other is sort of fast. i'm just nit picky though. so don't mind me. i like how you put song titles at the end of each chapter! i love downloading the songs while reading the chapters!

Hey, I read your old story. I can't wait to see how this one goes. I like it so far.