the story is moving fast.

Hayden is ok although if I knew someone like him in the "real" world... hell what am I saying I wouldn't give a **. Jude is always grinning, is that all he has, patent smiles.

peace 'cause it sounds right.

wow...I really enjoyed this story and I think that Hayden and Jude would actually make quite a fascinating couple. Could u plzz add more Jasper into this story since I would like to know more about Hayden's past life. I also think that Lewis is a really gd friend since he tolerates Haydens behaviour since grade 10. lol
update soon.thnkz

love cynics.

Really good story so far, I hope that you write more soon. No doubt I will be following you.
Somehow, you have managed to create a character that I like though he really is a bit of an idiot. He just has the hint of someone who underneath really cares, take the music book for instance, nice touch.
Please update soon, I'm enjoying this.
Ash.

Very good chapter. Hayden really is an intreaguing character.

Oh...no...Hayden...?

Oo, oo, oo, who's Jasper?
Must read on.

Oh, catch, I wonder what happened to his Mum.
I have a feeling that beneath that cold exterior he really cares about something. Maybe he just needs someone to bring that out.
Proceed to chapter 3 ...

I like it. He's an interesting character. Well done. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Hey so far im really enjoying your story, and i cant wait to read more. Im intrigued about Haydens story and how all this will turn out. I hope you update soon ^.^

BelieveIt

Oh, I just love reading the interactions between pricly Hayden and Matt. heehee. Tis chapter really gives quite a bit of bg info about Hayden as a character, not just Jude and Hayden as a pot. couple. I like that.

He really IS such a sh**y friend. Wow, he's like a walking time-bomb. I'm afraid he's going to get high blood pressure and his veins might pop. EVen towards his Mom. But at least he's .. interesting, to quote dear Matti!

Haha, you got a tan from going to Dorset. Maahha.. wherever Dorset is. Oddly, that sounds like someplace that would exist in Pride & prejudice. Should remember to ask Jude, he seems to have read and quoted it. Don't like the sun. I guess to each his own. I love the sun even if I get a major head ache from it.

Was wondering about Jasper. And wow, look. Hayden actually has a semi-life before Jude came into the picture. THings are picking up it seems and really sharing a room with Jude may be the ultimate test of HaYDEN'S patience. I'dd probably try to run the guy off a cliff. I like your analogy of Hayden being an alien and poking and prodding him. Hahah. Umm, yeah. Nice. can't wait for the next installmetn.

I love you, I love Hayden, I'm still deciding whether I love Jude or not, and Lewis is just the cutest guy EVER. This is just one of the most humorous, yet coolest, stories. And it is amazing.

I have to say you have great imagination..i really like all the characters, but most of all Hayden...of course,mostly because he has the "balls" to say everything on his mind.Sometimes i feel cynical to,but I am a wimp(I admit it) and shut up about my hate to the world.Anyhow...of all the guys in Hayden's life,I would really like to see him with this Mark fellow,because he seems genuine and serious about Hayden.I really think he is what Hayden needs.

can has Hayxlew pl0x? ;D
¬¬ Jude is such a ** and Mark is iffy. @.@
I can't wait to hear about the whole Jasper-ordeal though. >u<

Great chapter! Can't wait for the next. :D

so. the idea of Hayden being in love with Lewis (as Mark and Jude seem to think), without actually admitting it to himself or anyone, is kind of interesting.

you definitely make the story interesting. :D it's hard to guess with whom Hayden will end up, and I guess that's your intention? or maybe he won't ent up with anyone?