|Reviews for Autumnal Inspirations|
| isoelation 4/10/09 . chapter 1
I like this poem!
and i like the idea in this part
"nothing lasts forever
nothing is impossible
is it impossible to last forever?"
but wouldn't it be nicer to say that
"would it be impossible to last forever?"
then again, it's my own style. Like yours too. & it might actually help the impact if you use punctuation. I realise you don't. I don't use puncuations in my poems sometimes too, because I'm not exactly sure how to break it up. But it helps the pacing & the impact to us puncuation.
Hope you didn't take offence. I like this poem. Which was why I commented so much.
| black.magic89 4/10/09 . chapter 1
this is a well done poem, however it was very hard to read because of the formatting, I think this was probably just the site messing with your formatting, so better luck next time. Very nice read though, I thoroughly enjoyed it:)