|Reviews for Just Friends|
| ChainedHeart 8/7/09 . chapter 1
Really nice poem, my eyes are filled with tears. I am feeling like this now, after 9 years... I feel alive again. But it just seems like it's going to end in friendship. And I am thinking "why... why it does not make any sense! I want her! Unfair!" It just hurt so much :(
I liked your profile in the end, "I'LL BE SEEING YOU!" nice choice )
I usually end in "have fun!" ;)
| Wishiiwashii 7/24/09 . chapter 1
that made me wonder, then made me realize. i liked it xD.. it felt like ive felt this before, but havent. o_o
| 403 Forbidden 7/13/09 . chapter 1
This is really beautiful, really sad, but very beautiful. I love the lines; "And all I see/Is an innocent girl/And a stupid boy./Both of them/Clueless of how they felt." because the tone just...works. The flow of the poem was a little choppy at times, but overall, you did a great job.
| Landcaster 5/22/09 . chapter 1
This read like an inner monologue, and I liked the trust you instantly establish with the reader with the truth and sincerity of it. It reminded me of sonnet 36 by Shakespeare. Good job.
| Ward688 4/11/09 . chapter 1
Sheesh I'm kinda going thru this right now. Awesome job btw! :]
| Juliet21691 4/10/09 . chapter 1
oh my gosh that sounds so much like my life, you described the situation very well