Deffinately a great play. I like the dark, twistedness of it. If this was performed, I'd love to see it. Can't wait for the update!

Wow...this is definitely a very interesting play! I like it, even though it's dark and twisted, and Sundae clearly has pyschological problems, but it just makes reading this even better. Continue to write!

Very, very well done. Very nice story line. I didn't want to stop reading. Very interesting. I would love to see this staged.

A brilliant peice of writing and this would look great as a short film. and id love to re work this script into a short film screenplay. it reminds me a bit of the film Girl interupted. Very good though. love it

:( So good and so sad!