I don't do poetry but this was rather interesting. I take it the tone is of irritation with oneself? I get a feeling of things left undone and the wish that the speaker can not get the nagging of completing something worthwhile in his life but falling short repeatedly.
Though very short I felt rather moved by the words and the repetitive words gave it a little power.

The flow was good even though it was really short and I think it was really nice. Thanks for sharing.
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