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quotata 2009-11-28 . chapter 1
aww that was so cute! And it was like a fairytale, I wish my life was that cheery!
Black On White 2009-11-25 . chapter 1
I just reread this, and completely enjoyed it again. I wish you would do a sequel or something... that would rock. I love these characters. They're so hilarious and cute!
mixed signals 2009-11-23 . chapter 1
HI :D Reading this for the third time?

LOL. Anyway, I LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT :)

Emily's so cute ;) Couldn't help smiling when she said her first words and Delta's and Skyler's shocked reactions.

Love the flow of the story, portrayal of Delta's and Skyler's character
Elmo'z BFF 2009-11-22 . chapter 1
LOL naww, i love this! i hope you have another story which has both of them in it again!
xxXNightsareDaysXxx 2009-11-09 . chapter 1
Nice one!

I love it..totally sweet..
ForeverWasteAway 2009-10-07 . chapter 1
I just clicked on the little review button expecting it to say something along the lines of "Oops, you've already reviewed this chapter" or whatever that little notice usually says. I totally could've sworn I've reviewed this before! I've read it quite a few times, and now I feel mean for not even acknowledging it.

This is one of my favourite one-shots ever. Seriously. It's so happy and fluffy, but not overly sappy (or at all, really...which is good). I absolutely LOVE the characters. A lot of people try to make their female lead crazy and funny and wild and so in your face, that they just make her incredibly annoying and by the end of the story I want to stab her with a spork. But Delta is awesome. She's got one of those unique personalities,and she is semi-crazy, but it's actually believable.

If you were thinking of extending any of your one-shots, please make it this one! Even though it's a relatively short story, the characters you've created are already so lovable. Even Chastity, who I didn't like so much at the start with the whole 'abandoning baby' thing.

Okay, this is getting a bit long. Time to cut it short.

- steph
A Broken Heart Neva Heals 2009-09-19 . chapter 1
uh;o;h
balloonfista 2009-08-24 . chapter 3
Very cute, I love Sky. I like the idea of having a staring contest with the baby a lot, and also the title. Cool!

Ri
Cupid's Jinx 2009-08-20 . chapter 3
Ahh, I LOVE this!! I've read it so many times on my mobile, but this is the first time I've been able to read it on the laptop lol.

This is absolutely amuzzling!

XD

Lyra
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mpookiew 2009-07-25 . chapter 3
I loved it! I think you did a great job with the characters and with wrapping up the whole story.
Black On White 2009-07-23 . chapter 3
that was so so so cute!
surroundedANDalone 2009-07-14 . chapter 1
I really like this one, it is cute and shorter than a lot of stories on this site, but I think it has more substance. You get attached to the characters and want to know what happens in the next installment. The characters are realistic and not over done, as some you find that must face teen pregnancy etc. in some people's stories. Cute and well written.
tsuki 2009-07-11 . chapter 3
This is such an awesome story.

it was exactly what i needed!
Eat Muffinz. 2009-07-07 . chapter 3
Ah well...we all do what Emily demands don't we? :)
Anyways awesome story is was REALLY CUTE!
samora 2009-06-30 . chapter 3
damn this story is so incredibly cute and i want a skyler hes so sweet and cute and delta seems quirky but still really cool will these to be mentioned anytime soon in your other stories. their adorable together. great i loved it
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