wow! finished the story! It was absolutely enjoyable and an amazing piece of writing! THank you for writing it!

i just started reading your story and its really really good! i love how you said that love is not meant to be geometric =]

I really enjoyed reading this story! Abby is a delightful main character, and although it is easy to get frustrated with her and with Pembrake. Though I do wish the last two chapters weren't quite as abrupt, I do think your decision to leave the reader wondering how things have changed in the future a great one. :)

I've just read the first chapter, and already I am in love with Abby and with the story. You have written a very strong opening, and I love the way you've woven the exposition into the story. I cannot wait to read the rest of the story now! :)

I like where you leave the story, wish it could have been longer though as I'm curious as to what had changed but it works as it is. : ) Also I find your view of time to be really interesting. The fairytale-fantasy-adventure feel of the story was really good and this actually kind of reminded me of Howl's Moving Castle, which I love. The metaphors for their destinies and the bracelet was clever. I love your witches and Abby and Pembrake and Charlie.lol Thank you for this wonderful read! Oh and I loved the Mrs Crowthy commentaries that Abby had in her head about whacking with brooms...haha

Thanks again!

Aw so cute!

xx
Ali

The story was wonderful and you are a beautiful writer! But still you have to admit that ending was...lacking and very very VERY cliffy.

please please please write a sequel or a rewrite of the ending! i wanna know what happens in the future!

Aw! I love the ending!! :)
Everything just turns over on itself in the end. Well, except for Charlie x]
Beautiful story :)

Great story. Very sweet. I got a bit frustrated at the charactes for not comparing the things they found out, and just... not thinking about the right solution until it was almost too late, but they were all still lovable.

Except for typos you write really well.

Good work. I loved it! :)

oh man...
Aw, I'm wondering what pembrake's thinking too XD
I love the story so far and plan on finishing it soon x]

Thats it? No way?! That's no ending :( No epilogue? Nothing? But... how is that complete?

AGH... THAT'S SUCH A... uhmm... CLIFFY ENDING. it doesn' satisfy my ending cravings. or something like that. hmm.m. and i think the end was kinda rushed and i dunno. needs more details.

I'm so glad I spotted this story while browsing. Good characterization - I immediately came to like Abby, Charlie, Pembrake, and the rest of your characters as I read.

I really like the world you created, although I feel like you could have added more description about it. As for the ending, I personally felt as though it's been rushed, but I like how it's open (makes me think of what changes both Abby and Pembrake made in history.) Also, there are grammatical and spelling errors/typos, but overall this was an enjoyable read, and even though it could be longer in my opinion (you did create an interesting world), I like the plot (even if it's a bit predictable; then again, the ending is open for possibilities.)

WHERE THE HELL IS THE END?!

I loved this. You really have a knack for telling a great story! The text itself could use a little editing - it looks like you didn't proofread any of the chapters before you posted them. But the plot and characters and especially the setting were so charming and absorbing that it made up for it. Good job!