o.O Wow...this is good stuff. Me likes. And gory >:3

I thought this was a wonderful story; it also contains my new favourite quote;
"Time seemed to stutter as she fell to her knees and was swallowed up by nature’s abortion."
You truly are a wordsmith my good sir. Kudos for the amazing story. :)

Well written. I love the style and pacing. Awesome imagery.

I seriously can't describe anymore how amazing this piece is.

To be honest I really can't find any proper words to describe how... beautiful I found this.

The exquisite detail, the setting and the atmosphere in this is executed well.

Dark, disturbing, and very well written. You're writing style is very poetic - something that contrasts quite nicely with your subjects. Well done.

Wow. You have some serious skills. What I've read by you so far, I can't even begin to comprehend. It scares me and that's wonderful.

Dark and beautiful with a nice touch of lyrical writing.

Very good story are we going to see more of this one?

Great! I loved the imagery. So very poetic too. This is defenitly going on my favorites list.

BP

Mister Moore, the way you write, it is simply crazy how vividly I can see it. Reading your work is like a hit of LSD in an R rated wonderland of sorts.

Whomever thought that a story has to make sense to be great is a liar.

xo
H.L.B