You know, I was thinking this was going to be some really deep, very insightful thing, but when I read it, it made me smile. It sort of reminds of the show Joan of Arc, only Daniel really does believe that this is God, and he knew it right off the bat. One thing I'd add, if I were you, would be how Daniel knew that this man was God.

lol! this was a cool representation of faith and God. I laughed when he responded about his Son by saying "fine, fine". this was short, fun, and had a good message. Thanks for posting.

I like the idea for this. It's very creative. The only thing is, God seems a little... distant. Reading Psalm 139, I see a God who knows us personally, inside and out, in a very intimate matter. Maybe make this conversation a little more personal? Like with Jesus and the woman at the well, where He told her exactly what was going on in her life. Other than that, you have a great writing style. The dialog proceeds in a very natural manner. This might sound weird, but I like how you described the bus coming to a stop while they were conversing. It was very realistic.

Long time no see!

whatever you come back with, it always manages to stun me- in a pleasant sort of way, of course. Meeting God on the street; how appropriate for Easter. The way you wrote about him is just about perfect, too. Touching lives one at a time kinda approach, yeah? Lovely job.

Happy Easter!

Good practical theology in a playful but talented writing style. I like it!

This was so pleasantly absurd--I really enjoyed this. I don't normally read prose here on FictionPress but the first paragraph really drew me in. Great job!

marie