|Reviews for The Rock Star and the Roadie|
| Casey Drake 10/24/09 . chapter 1
It's true! Techies -do- rule the world!
| BellsAndRoses 5/28/09 . chapter 1
At the end there was a bit of twisted humor, but it was hilarious. An excellent poem!
| aicilef 4/13/09 . chapter 1
All your rhymes are forced sounding almost as if you're focusing more on making it rhyme than its content. Just let it flow. "let the words flow" as Fictionpress would say...